http://andrewpascua.wix.com/1stsemesterportfolio
This first semester was a surprise for me because it was very more challenging than I though it would be in this MeneMac Program. But I managed to get through the obstacles that I had encountered. I've learned a lot from this first semester. My writing has been more organized since I have entered this program. Even though I had experience with Media, I have learned many more media knowledge. This program has helped me in a lot of different ways. I have many more things to know and I hope next semester will be better than this great first semester.
Parents Response:
ReplyDeleteWhat piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why? Querencia. On how he describes the feeling while riding his bike.
What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you
like to see me improve on?
I was surprised on organized my son will be. He needs to have more expression and creativity when writing.
Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do
you feel was most successful for me?
Ideas suits him the most.
Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
He needs to tune up his word choice. He repeated some words.