I put in my headphones putting on shuffle. First of 500 songs. I hop on my bike, taking my first pedals. I take it slow but once I hit the streets, I start pedaling faster bringing up my momentum. Getting faster, and faster. Mashing through traffic, I am not stopping for nothing. I could hear car horns beeping at me from behind. I don't make my way to turn back. I just keep pedaling.
The feel of the wind blowing through my hair makes me want to keep riding. The feeling of sprinting, being brake-less, and the fact that their is nobody to tell me what to do or what not to do makes me feel like a bad ass.
As I finally end to a stop at Diamond Head, my iPod is already at hundredth song. I look back from my view, and it just trips me out sometimes. How far I managed to get here on bike. Fixed Gear don't stop. Where will my bike take me to next time?
I enjoyed how descriptive your draft was. It was like I could see it play out in my head. You should write more about how you find yourself and how this place is special to you
ReplyDeleteI also agree with eddie but you should take out the cursing words. Also you should say where your special place is. Is it the bike or Diamond Head?
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