As I walk up the stairs of my grandparents house, I could smell the sweet smell that lingers in the small house. The smell of my grandma's banana lumpia.
The Sound of the pastry wrap getting fried, *crackle*, gets my stomach to grumble. As my grandma is busy cooking, I manage to sneak a deluctable, mouth-watering banana lumpia. I take one bike of the very crisp,sweet wrap. And it tastes so good, so I attempt to grab another. But then my grandma slaps my hand and cussed in Ilocano.
I brushed off and asked her,"Who taught you this recipe? It's so good!" As she finished another batch of banana lumpia, she replied with,"At first, I use to do the traditional recipe; banana, sugar and pastry wrap. But when your Aunty Vangie came to visit, she made her recipe and passed it on to me. Instead of regular sugar, she used organic sugar to make it taste sweeter."
My grandma has been cooking since she was 8 years old. She learned from Mama Lubing. I appreciate that she been cooking for more than 40 years for her family and for others as well.
I always get excited for family parties, cause I know that she will always cook great big batches of her scrumptious banana lumpia.
Her banana lumpia recipe is special to me because my grandmother is very special to me. And I hope that she will pass this recipe to me when I learn how to cook banana lumpia.
You have a good use of sensory detail. But please watch for word use error, spelling and grammatical error (i.e., "stomach to grumble" I dont think it actually grumbles but maybe growls, "deluctable" not sure this is the right word). Many of your sentences are incomplete "I brushed off and asked her" (what did you brush off). You need to complete your ideas. Your last thoughts are that your grandmother is special to you, but there is no explanation to why she is at all.
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